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Sunshine by ~DarkbloodRayne:iconDarkbloodRayne:



Crazy beautiful
Beautifully crazed
She stares at the world amazed
Shock and awe
Reading the words
Hearing the names
A surreal form of reality
It finally set in
Finally, one of her better days
One glimmer of hope
One shining star in the night sky
Thats all she needs
Thats all she wants
She for once feels alive
Energy eminating from within
Its warm and comforting
And gets stronger when she talks to him
No longer does her death show before her eyes
Instead, a new life
One with many a surprise
The dark and gloomy days have passed
Like a storm leaving
Off in the horizon
The wind and the sun blow it all away
A fresh new day
A hopeful day
The warm breeze
The bright sunshine
Birds singing
Her smile, it does shine
©2007-2008 ~DarkbloodRayne
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i told them.
i told them all.
he shines with her, above them all.




:)

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~ethanwoods:iconethanwoods: Dec 29, 2007, 8:08:35 AM
beautiful rhyming scheme
i love this.

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the sun is ashamed to rise and be in love with all of these vampires
~DarkbloodRayne:iconDarkbloodRayne: Dec 29, 2007, 8:45:13 AM
thank you so much!

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I can never be more than I am
I will never be anything but myself.
I am me, that's all that I can be!
~ethanwoods:iconethanwoods: Dec 29, 2007, 4:57:56 PM
your'e very welcome.

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the sun is ashamed to rise and be in love with all of these vampires
~Kadjet:iconKadjet: Dec 30, 2007, 4:18:45 AM
Ees beautiful, i love it. <3

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~Kadjet
~DarkbloodRayne:iconDarkbloodRayne: Dec 30, 2007, 8:44:32 AM
thank you for the fav cc! and the comment


=)

<3

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I can never be more than I am
I will never be anything but myself.
I am me, that's all that I can be!